Monday, 15 March 2021

The Tunnel writing 2

 

I can see two people on a small thing that looks like a waka. I can also see a great white shark that looks so terrifying and tt looks  like  the men standing up  are holding a fishing rod. I wonder how they feel . I also wonder if the water is warm or not. 

If I saw a shark I would try to stay calm until it goes away. When it goes,  I will quickly get out. I wonder how they are feeling. I notice their reflection in the water. That shark looks like it would of won a shark race if they had a race.  

What I would see first when a shark is coming towards me, I would see their sharp thing on top of their head. I think the men and women are feeling as the shark is coming towards them, they are feeling brave and confident.


3 comments:

  1. Hi this is Phoenix in room 8.Room 8 did the same leaning

    BLOG YOU LATER
    PHOENIX.

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  2. very discriptive and you oviosly put a lot of work into it.
    lochie rm25

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  3. Hi Darcy it's Kapiri,
    I really like your description of this picture and I also like how you wrote about how the characters are feeling.
    How long did it take to describe this picture?
    Bye

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